Saturday, September 19, 2009

Madeleine Rewrites the Paragraph

Yes, readers, I rewrote the paragraph AGAIN--the same paragraph I said I was finally finished with a few days ago. I didn't want to rewrite it, but I couldn't stop myself, and I certainly couldn't write the next paragraph or any other part of the story until I was satisfied. So I worked on it for several hours this afternoon at Agnes's apartment.

Then I biked over to Agnes's studio and read the first four pages of the story to Agnes, including the newest version of the perturbing paragraph, and she liked them--and I did, too.

Now I think I really am finished with it and ready to move on.

Really.

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